Matt, The overall mass and expression of your building in the perspective looks right. The "slot" windows you added makes the building appear having six stories... A would suggest for the final perpective to reduce the crash wall, especially towards the west end and add some entourage, mostly trees or other greenery to soften the transition to th eground.
I'll do that. The perspective was tricky... having such an angle and distance to it. the scale, size and distance between windows is a gesture to the surrounding architecture and scale seen very evident in this photo. I like the play between what is perceived outside and what is real inside. I also feel it brings human scale to the facade seeing seperation at a more regular interval than floor to floor.
Having the openings on the facade is a +. It certainly breaks down the scale of the wall, I also like the turbines at the top, just be cautious of the proximity of the turbines in regards to each other, you may want to quickly check on what's required for service or removal in case something breaks. Mechanical equipment most of the time requires 3'-0" min.
Master Yoda is great! I enjoyed the image and got a good chuckle. People at work probably thought I was crazy, I know for a fact that they think I am a nerd. :-) The Revit label and your building model on Yoda's hand was the icing on the cake. Keep raising the bar chief, no holding back! Ever..
Thanks Eddie, I'm glad you liked it. I was having a laugh myself! I showed it to people at my office and this didn't get it so I took them down the Vader/Revit path we've been on. They find it humurous there is a Star Wars back story going on along with our studio project and Revit.
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Matt,
The overall mass and expression of your building in the perspective looks right. The "slot" windows you added makes the building appear having six stories... A would suggest for the final perpective to reduce the crash wall, especially towards the west end and add some entourage, mostly trees or other greenery to soften the transition to th eground.
Thanks Werner,
I'll do that. The perspective was tricky... having such an angle and distance to it. the scale, size and distance between windows is a gesture to the surrounding architecture and scale seen very evident in this photo. I like the play between what is perceived outside and what is real inside. I also feel it brings human scale to the facade seeing seperation at a more regular interval than floor to floor.
Matt,
Having the openings on the facade is a +. It certainly breaks down the scale of the wall, I also like the turbines at the top, just be cautious of the proximity of the turbines in regards to each other, you may want to quickly check on what's required for service or removal in case something breaks. Mechanical equipment most of the time requires 3'-0" min.
Master Yoda is great! I enjoyed the image and got a good chuckle. People at work probably thought I was crazy, I know for a fact that they think I am a nerd. :-)
The Revit label and your building model on Yoda's hand was the icing on the cake. Keep raising the bar chief, no holding back! Ever..
Thanks Eddie, I'm glad you liked it. I was having a laugh myself! I showed it to people at my office and this didn't get it so I took them down the Vader/Revit path we've been on. They find it humurous there is a Star Wars back story going on along with our studio project and Revit.
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